Again...
You're animation and drawing is excellent, but your stories need so much more work! Hook up with a good writer and you're set!
Again...
You're animation and drawing is excellent, but your stories need so much more work! Hook up with a good writer and you're set!
Great Animation...lame story
First off, I love the buidling at the beginning...it was so nicely drawn.
Now,...you have so much potential, yet the story was dull and dry. Almost a waste if you ask me. I'm not saying your character sucks, but c'mon, you make him talk for like 10 min to the audience with only one motion of him turining around looking at the door. I only got up to when he was talking about that weird critter. You deffinately need to come up with something that keeps people hooked from beggining till' end.
Man, you people love your violence
Which is the main reason why I can think this is ranked so high. Look, it's a really good movie, but c'mon, #1 on the portal? Well, you do know how to appeal to the this type of audience...blood blood blood. The only thing that bothers me is why a bullet and a table to the chest have the same effect of killing someone. (Some guy gets it with a chair and dies on impact)
You are well on your way
Obviously you have some illustration and animation skills. Not too many suggestions on imporvment, except the expression on the creatures face when he gets burned...it looks like he is smiling. Study human facial expressions to get that more accurate. but besides that, great stuff. (I cant vote you a high score because something is wrong with the newgrounds server!) : P
Awesome!
Keep up the great artwork. It is hard to come by these days, expecially on sites like these.
Grimace is Dead was really nice looking too... and funny. So I respect your opinion. Thanks.
Great Potential
Ok, the first Evil Dead rules! The second one was kind of lame, and the 3rd one sucks major ass! Anyways, looking forward to seeing this series
whoa
that was pretty messed up. Way to go! Keep doing stuff like that, I mean, if you're good at something, stick to it
Flash Worthy
This is what I call good animation. It is nice to watch a cartoon on Newgrounds that contains a nice clean style and solid animation. keep up the great work
Haha! Wicked!
The guy before me called this project lame, but I do not know what he's basing it on. Great piece of entertainment guys!
What is wrong with you people???
Are you Newgrounds' members insane??? How the #%$^ does this cartoon end up getting a 3 average rating when all it is is a faded clock in the background with scrolling text? There are so many hard working animators on this site that put a lot more effort, skill, and time into making a cartoon, and do not even reach a 3 point average. You people who voted high on this cartoon are the same people that support crap out there just because it has a "swoosh" on it or because it was "brought to you by, Coca-Cola"
Here is a message to all the hard working animators out there..."Keep up the good work" and I'll be supporting you!
I used to fly like Peter Pan
Age 43, Male
Illustrator/Animator
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Toronto, ON
Joined on 12/2/02